This is my first writing here, so I would greatly appreciate some constructive criticism. Thank you!


Author: Silver
Type: Poems
Rating: Safe
Status: Complete
Series: None
Preceding: None
Succeeding: None

Cold shivers running down your back

Blood turns to ice

Veins, frozen rivers

Waiting, suspense, terror

An icicle hanging in the frozen air

A sharp sound escapes your lips

Quiet, then louder, and finally, it's unbearable

The one thing you dread most

Beckons you with a hand full of deathly claws

They tap you on the cheek

Ever so gently

Stroking your neck

Like a statue, you stay still

A perfect, unmoving silhouette

Is cast against the wall

Fingers lace around, delicately rubbing your throat

And then he strikes

Another shriek echoes around the ever-so-dark room

The metallic scent of blood taints the air

There is a long silence

A man offers you his hand.

He is your lover.

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